Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples.
Combining studying and working at the same time is prone to be problematic because it is required time to have an efficient result. Some people think that employment causes distraction while studying, hence it is not feasible to perform those simultaneously. In this essay, I will explore the advantages and disadvantages of learning and working at the same time before giving my personal opinion.
To begin with, one of the most cited advantages of doing both tasks simultaneously is gaining experience. Work experience is valuable because it will help to score better jobs after graduation. Moreover, work knowledge is also transitional, hence students can take advantage of it in their study journey. In addition, students also get financially support by employment and it will help them to pay school fee and equipment for their study. Merging studying and working are the best strategy for students to sharpen their career opportunity.
However, many believe that employment will distract learning. Time will become less if students focus on both things at the same time, therefore their personal life will be affected. Furthermore, scramming both activities at once also seems to be physically and mentally exhausted. Employing and learning are two tasks which do not seem to work well together.
In conclusion, the main issues of learning and working at the same time are time and money. It is has been shown that working will coexist studying in term of financial support, though it will also drag down personal time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 381, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
...rking at the same time before giving my personal opinion. To begin with, one of the most cited ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19028340081 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84141888202 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587044534413 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6563727125 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5714285714 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177520782301 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676416556897 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381141789297 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119130094124 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034600711324 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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