Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace, so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples.
A matter of considerable controversy at present issue is whether, study requires relax, peaceful, clam and silent space. On the other word, people thinks that employment is good with studying. both side of this contentious issue will put under scrutiny and my opinion as to which holds more weight will be given.
To being with, a variety of advantages can be put forward, to explain why peaceful, relax and clam place required to study, and gain the knowledge as well as to get your desired goal. In my personal opinion study and employment are the two side of one coin, even you can take my example; furthermore, I've completed my Diploma in Electrical engineering in 2013, and since i'm working but till date neither i'm able to earn that much money nor i'm at good post. Hence, i would argue that person should be alone to have study and get; whatever, they want.
On the other side of this issue, ultimately we are all working and giving our blood/sweat for the earning money only. It is undeniable that each one of the learners motive either to get higher salaried job or setup o own business which will benefits them for their remaining life.
In conclusion, considering the both side of this issue, while there are strong arguments on both side of case and my suggestion would be go with traditional method i.e. peace, calm and relax study module which will help to current world for better tomorrow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47913484716 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635627530364 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5962591171 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129126727902 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542314071239 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331034639153 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747343218767 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393972192715 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.