The environment we are living is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
There is a heated debate among people about the responsibility of governments and individuals in protecting the environment. There are a great number of people who interpret the impacts of government on the environment, while others who hold an opponent’s view. I am inclined to believe that both government and individuals are responsible to conserve the environment.
There is no skepticism surrounding the fact that it is the prime responsibility of governments to take decisive actions to protect environment. This is to say that the higher administration has power to impose stringent rules and regulations on main sources of air pollution, which could consequently ameliorate the situation. For example, a higher tax on factories and lorries that are tremendously dumping hazardous and poisonous gases and materials to air and rivers, would certainly compel them to conform the standard policies, therefore, there would be a significant decline in the carbon footprint.
On the other hand, it is claimed that individuals should be encouraged by governments to use public transportation, which not only result in saving fossil fuels, but also helps to reverse global warming trend. This may be attributed to the fact that buses and trains are able to carry a tremendous number of passengers, so that they can enormously discharge air pollution. Specifically, a research study conducted by Yale University found that the paramount way to reduce air pollution is to confine each family to only one car because people have become more vehicle dependent during the last decade
In a nutshell, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that both individuals and authorities should be actively involved in protecting the environment, which entirely support my point of view. It is expected that the government takes the cognizance of these facts and establish guidelines in order to educate people in regard to this matter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40594059406 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21290137474 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.9975823855 50.4703680194 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.8 104.977214359 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.9669160288 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125720506622 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049316579473 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286165316983 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072731308095 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217793807752 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 12.6369458128 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 55.0591133005 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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