The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
Day by day, the environment that creatures have been living is transforming in to more danger. There are lots of facts effect for this risk, such as: environment pollution, human behaviour etc. It is believed that governments should take the responsibility to mitigate the issues.
First and foremost, environment pollution is one of the major issue that we face in our day today life and individuals or organizations cannot solve this complex issue. Environment pollution has been damaging to human life in to certain extent, and this cannot be controlled by individuals or organizations, but as a solution governments should provide rules and regulations to overcome this issue. For example, Indian governments has published environment related Acts in recent past to protect environment. It should be taken in to account that, this complex solution top down break down and problem solving is on the hand of the government.
On the other hand, modern environment related problems should be included in to the school education system by the governments in theoretical and academic point of view. Pupils will study the problem as a subject and analyse the solution in different angles, but any of the organizations or individuals cannot interfere in to this matter. For example, Sweden government had included different kind of environment related problems in to school syllabus and has been updating the syllabus. Therefore, it is believe that government must take the responsibility to insert this matter as a subject in to the school education.
In conclusion, each and every government should take the maximum responsibility to overcome this major issue, while facilitating contingency and disaster recovery planes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...updating the syllabus. Therefore, it is believe that government must take the responsib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11991918927 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514814814815 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8945659068 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250460058334 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938785060566 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278386097454 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147196353745 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385385286048 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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