Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools, especially at the preschool level. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
In this modern ear, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the positive and negative impact on preschool education due to music. While it is possible to clam that the music as an optional subject in primary education, my point of view is that music as an essential subject for primary education. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing the both points of views.
First and foremost, there are several reasons why music should establish as an essential subject in preschool education. Music improves the human brain power in a cognitive way, and it increases the scientific adaptation for other subjects. For example, several researches in China has shown that primary school music education has improved the brain capacity and brain drain of their preschool pupils. Because of the above point, it is taken into consideration that the music should deploy in preschool education as a help for other subjects.
On the other hand, those who argue negative effects have a different point of view and say music as optional subject and remove it from preschool education. In this case, their expectation is to produce a robot-like child from preschools. Therefore, it is taken into consideration that the, music should be a necessary subject for all preschool education.
In conclusion, it is strongly believed music such as classical as a critical and major subject that every preschool child should adopt. In nutshell, I should strongly recommend government and professionals’ interference is essential to establish a musical culture in preschools in a cognitive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2277992278 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95342316093 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494208494208 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6409267814 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.833333333 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180713279057 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779225701568 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437529203004 0.071462118173 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121664642991 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237663289169 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.5 Out of 90
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