The environment we are living in is danger due to various problems. Who do you think should be responsible to solve it? Governments, organizations or each individual?
Nowadays, the influence of the environment that we are living in is danger due to various problems has become long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “The environment we are living in is the danger due. Who should be the responsible; Governments, organizations or each individual?”. It is a widely held view that the problems with the environment cannot be solved in one day or one year, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is common belief that the Government it is not the only one responsible for environmental problems. Therefore, I express several reasons why support this idea. First and foremost is that Government should impose more tax on the people that not separated the garbage in recycling bins as the population in Japan do because the Japan Government have extreme control in garbages. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that organizations could pay more tax to avoid the problems in air, and Government could apply more penalties when the organizations do not take care of the environment.
However, undoubtedly that each individual could help the environment avoiding use cars, using more public transport and avoiding put the smoke garbage in the same place as normal garbage’s. It should be taken into account that not only the Government is responsible for environmental problems.
In conclusion, I entirely agree that everyone need take responsibilities to solve environmental problems. Although, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27240143369 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21249743535 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562724014337 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.649094893 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.727272727 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356157406542 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121215835093 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106789799218 0.071462118173 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181677378274 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106665744412 0.0609392437508 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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