‘Environmental problems are too great to be manage by individuals so real change can be achieved at governments level’
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
Environmental problems are one of the major problem that has been facing by all creatures around the world. This problem can be categories in to many forms such as air, water and sound pollution and damages the life styles of creatures in dangerous manner. It is believed that governments must take necessary actions to overcome this issue.
First and foremost, governments must establish and update rules and regulations to overcome environment related issues that individuals can not address. The total problem must be categorized in to top down approach, and each section must address in a separate manner. For example, separate acts related to soil erosion or air toxics has to be imposed by the government which individuals cannot be addressed, and we can observe this sort of environment in India. There for, it should be taken in to account that rules and regulations are one of the most important factor to issue mitigation.
On the other hand, around the world there are lots of places that has not been civilized, but in those places environment pollution has been affected heavily and adequate funds are required to address those issues in project based. This large amount of funds can’t invest by individuals and governments must take the leadership to lead such projects. For examples, Australian government has been addressing the junk removal project in space since last year, while investing million dollars of money. According to this large projects can’t be carry out without government interference.
Environmental pollution is too large to be addressed by the individuals and governments must mitigate the risk in to certain extent. To conclude, I agree that governments need to take major steps to control environmental hazards and they can contribute the most.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a separate manner" with adverb for "separate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...approach, and each section must address in a separate manner. For example, separate acts related to ...
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Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... space since last year, while investing million dollars of money. According to this lar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, as to, for example, sort of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26388888889 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87388431116 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538194444444 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6829014411 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.615384615 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199946453233 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821429496161 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498771141584 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131416787454 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159518583979 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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