Essay topics:
equal tourism
The lecture was about equal tourism which comprised sustainable tourism as well as environmental friendly tourism. The spokesperson determined government promoting eco-tourism, which emphasized the significance of scientific foundation. Ultimately, although both social and economy problems could be inferred evidently from the green travelers, the corresponding impacts of traveler’s responsibility as well as right choice of marketing were acknowledged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 0.0 20.9802955665 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 31.9359605911 16% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 404.0 1207.87684729 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 59.0 242.827586207 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.84745762712 5.00649968141 137% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.77148800248 3.92707691288 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.670655861 2.71678728327 135% => OK
Unique words: 47.0 139.433497537 34% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.796610169492 0.580463131201 137% => OK
syllable_count: 123.3 379.143842365 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.57093596059 134% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6551724138 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8152140973 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337344422805 0.242375264174 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221304418708 0.0925447433944 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.228958305604 0.071462118173 320% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337344422805 0.151781067708 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 12.6369458128 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 9.89 53.1260098522 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.45 11.5310837438 195% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.07 8.32886699507 145% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 55.0591133005 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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