Experience is the best teacher than traditional teaching methods. Agree/ Disagree
In this contemporary era, the human society is forging ahead at an amazing rate in various realms. Yet, at the same time, a grave issue that whether experience can work more effective than formal school study and books or not has triggered intensive controversy.
Undeniably, it is more likely that a theoretical statement is difficult to be illustrated and conveyed to learner, which is a reason why students need to practice what they perceive. More specifically, students can understand the theory easier which they are taught by experiencing how it works since many theories have developed on the basis of empirical knowledge. Therefore, experience gives students more impression on what they study at school.
Furthermore, it should recognize that experience would benefit one’s career development directly. More specifically, experience helps students learning about the real social life and equipping them with the soft skills needed to succeed in future work life. Gap year to student is an appropriate example that students normally travel or maintain some types of regular work, and then they would know what they want in the future study. Thus, rich experience would make you more confident and mature to meet the job.
To summarize, from what have been discussed, I highly support the idea that experience is our unique experience, no matter good or bad, because it will make us grow. A person’s success, in addition to education, is closely related to the accumulation of personal experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.377593361 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91111294967 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668049792531 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6745020851 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.818181818 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0678216525818 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288675977254 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285523655045 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.041476599721 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172866205742 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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