Mass media have an influence on human, particularly on younger generation. It plays a vital role on shaping the opinions of people. What do you think about it?
In this contemporary era, the human society is forging ahead at a meteoric rate in various realms. Yet, at the same time, many problems has arisen, a grave one that mass media impact on people's life has triggered intensive controversy. In my point of view, the undue influence of the mass media is a challenge to younger generation.
Undeniably, it is more likely that young people's behavior is affected by mess media. More specifically, a large amount of information can obtain easily by young people in the diversified source of media, such as magazine, TV and internet, which could control the young's decisions, like shopping, education and behavior. Research has shown that there is a direct association between commercials for junk food, snacks and candies and mounting levels of obesity among younger generation.
Nevertheless, mass media affects younger people's wellbeing. In particular, it should be recognized that teenagers are not ability to understand and interpret information easily, which make them hard to distinguish the information acquired by mass media truthful or not. media attempts to attract intended viewers and increase the audience through exaggerating reporting some crises or threats, traffic accidents and terrorist attacks, for instance, which will lead to viewer's especially the young overreacting and mood swings, as they tend to believe that they are under threat constantly.
To summarize, from what have been discussed, I highly support the idea that apart from young generation's understanding of the world, mass media have a profound impact on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for instance, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48387096774 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91882012569 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.0423566179 50.4703680194 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185866226367 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804523154435 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623677176271 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110602138468 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365418348598 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.