Experience is a more effective way to teach rather than books. What is your opinion?
Practice makes man perfect which is common saying while talking about experience. People having experience in any field are more valuable as compared to having bookish knowledge. These days, there is an ongoing debate that experience is more beneficial then only reading books. In this essay, I will provide my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
Experience is the key to success. People who are experienced can tackle and solve the problem efficiently as compared to their counterparts. For instance, according to a study by University of California revealed that businesses flourished highly and in effective manner where the employees are experienced and dedicated. Hence, having experience makes people enhance their way to approach the problem and simplify to be resolved.
On the other hand, the books change the personality of the reader. In the books, the author has provided his own experience in detail. Therefore, the reader can take the benefit by reading the book. For example, a survey has done in early 21st century by United Nation showed that numerous talented CEO of the fortune 100 companies have habit of reading books. Consequently, book reading enhances the vision and provides the intellectual benefits to his reader in usually less time.
Experience is the best teacher whereas book reading is also beneficial. This essay discussed the benefits of experience and book reading at the same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26406926407 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75445806347 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5634912021 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0666666667 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143132824582 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498840098062 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050436909489 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836126086392 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252143120611 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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