Fast food has become a part of our society. What is the impact of fast food on human life?
Fast food has taken over this contemporary society, so much so instead of eating fast food, fast food is eating us. The problem consumption of junk food is very critical now days. This essay will discuss the impact of fast food on human life.
It is absolutely true that fast food is inextricable part of our life and modern society. The obsession of junk food is the result of laziness of the people and easy availability of the junk food. For example, lazy people overridden by technology can easily call the nearby fast food chain like Mcdonalds, pizzahut, and the food will be outside their door in 30 minutes. On the one hand, it is good. Everyone has right to eat whatever they like. On the other hand, over consumption of fast food has adverse effect on the body.
The major problem associated with junk food is obesity. The reason behind obesity is the high amount of calorie contain in fast food. Adding to that, obesity in turn gives birth to different health problem such as diabetes, heart attack. For instance, many scientific research shows that many people are becoming victim of such disease just because they are obsess. Therefore, it is safe to say, that junk food is solely responsible currently predominant health problem of this modern society.
To sum up, this easily available food has become an indispensible part of the present day society which is very concerning issue when will analyze the impact it has up on the human life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: obsessed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76679841897 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44404326844 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557312252964 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4180709946 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.52407996404 0.242375264174 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174213417004 0.0925447433944 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149270953535 0.071462118173 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31713286092 0.151781067708 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127567990929 0.0609392437508 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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