The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
The role of zoos in conserving animals is widely debated, with many people claiming that zoos cannot be compared with the natural habitat that animal require to thrive. In my opinion, this proposition merits serious consideration.
There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my opinion. The most conspicuous one is that zoos usually have limited space for animal, which are rather accustomed to an open environment under the sky. Not only does this congested space that they are forced to live in hamper their normal movement, but it also keeps them from
interacting with other animal in their natural habitat in the forest. Needless to say, no matter how many facilities animals enjoy in captivity, this unnatural life in the cage cannot contribute to their effective nourishment whatsoever.
Besides, being superior to and more powerful than other animal, humans have no right to keep them captive, deteriorating the ecological balance enormously. Unlike those animal that live in the jungle without any restriction and so enjoy a spontaneous life over there, animals in captivity are sadly deprived of their basic
rights, freedom being a pivotal one. Hence, it is apparent why many are against keeping animals in the zoo.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the drawbacks of the zoo are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...its serious consideration. There are a myriad of arguments in favor of my opinion. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11711711712 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64008544032 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2114929877 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242152626681 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086816560937 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072855605213 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121376704982 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587578321646 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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