How to control the rapidly growing population in the cities and the necessary measures to be taken to control it.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is colossal upsurge in number of people believing that population is growing rapidly in cities . There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriads of concerns in one’s life however I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favor of my stance the most preponderant one is that low population cannot only contribute to live beneficial life but also lead numerous other benefits in various field thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers not only can one benefit more when it comes being effective but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives with ease efficacy and convenience needless to say all these merit stand on in good stead as far as the augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas . Besides only when such follow a system can they broaden their horizons learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication, and perseverance . Hence it is apparent why many are in the favor of the aforementioned topic.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of topic are indeed too great too ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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.... Besides only when such follow a system can they broaden their horizons learning...
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... benefits of topic are indeed too great too ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95217391304 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85395785352 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595652173913 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.904459369 50.4703680194 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.714285714 104.977214359 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8571428571 20.9669160288 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.054736526671 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268446650855 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538414822691 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0292848444714 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347995505603 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 12.6369458128 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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