How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause?

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How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause?

Recently, people spending too much time at work and ignoring personal life have triggered a controversy over the world. Some people believe that one has to balance the office and personal timings, whereas others reject this notion saying that it is important to work hard in this competitive world. This essay will discuss why it is important for people to spend equal time at work and home and the problems caused by not maintaining it.

Firstly, there are myriad reasons that stem to the fact that people spending too much time on work than personal life, but the most preponderant one was the way globalization has caused the competition for places. As a result of this, people started to spend more time at work to meet the goals leaving less time for their family. For instance, a recent study shows that people are working for more than 16 hours daily to meet the project deadline which is alarming considering the time they get for themselves to spend with their family. This is clearly evident that employees are spending more time at work.

Furthermore, the impact of having less time for family leads to problems like disturbing the harmony of the family. Due to lack of time, people are facing multiple health issues and are getting hospitalized. This makes a clear case that people have to plan things properly to avoid family and health problems.

In conclusion, this essay has discussed the reasons like competition for people spending more time at work and problems faced like obesity. In my opinion, work-life balance requires a serious consideration if one wants to lead a happy life.

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but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, whereas, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9010989011 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50232754027 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531135531136 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4072286607 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356278941239 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155991226627 0.0925447433944 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805611016405 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227811552658 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701774675187 0.0609392437508 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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