The importance of cars and airplane in modern life. Give example.

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The importance of cars and airplane in modern life. Give example.

In this burgeoning epoch of cars and aeroplanes are the best option for travelling, a contemporary human dwells in a world which is shaped by the latest trends and approaches coming across the globe points for years. The opponents and proponents have their perceptual intellection to support their ideas. Before deducing a fair conclusion, I am going to shed some light on both the aspects in the upcoming paragraphs.

According to the first school of thought, many people say that travelling by car provides us with privacy and cars are the best way to reach our destination. In addition to it, today cars have many safety features to protect us from any major damage during an accident like these days cars are equipped with airbags to protect us from any major injury during an accident. Moreover, if a person owns a car then they can travel to their destination without any planning and they do not have to face hustle and bustle of public transports.

On the other hand, some others believe that aeroplanes are the best and the fastest means of travel due to the fact that critics can travel to another country at very high speed which is best in today's world. Apart from that, In emergency cases, aeroplanes are the best-suited mode of travel for instance employees working in corporate offices can travel to other branches within a short period of notice to attend Business meetings. last but not the least, these day's many students want to study overseas and aeroplane are the crucial mode of transportation to travel to another country.

To perorate, after having a lot of thoughts and deliberations with myself on this topic, I inclined to state that yes cars and aeroplanes are the great inventions made by human beings which provide comfort safety and chance to travel to other countries.

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Average: 10 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...or damage during an accident like these days cars are equipped with airbags to prote...
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Line 9, column 435, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
... of notice to attend Business meetings. last but not the least, these days many stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 31.9359605911 172% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 308.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8961038961 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60112557859 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1533647924 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.8 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 20.9669160288 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0661711991437 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267864548235 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303048489435 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398861785998 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339313907773 0.0609392437508 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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