The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.
The value of cars and airplanes in modern era is countless & everyone wants his own separate vehicle along with luxuries facilities. Each and everyone is using or dreaming to use, the best car and plane model. They want to buy to have great ride with world class benefits.
To begin with, the interest of people in vehicle is increasing tremendously also the manufacturers of motor cars are providing world class benefits in new vehicles. Now day's cars and plane attraction is like, this is primary requirement of human life after food, water and shelter. The airplane is also in competition with all way in car but the higher amount of it makes it some rare. Linked to this, many entrrpreneurs are using such wonderful vehicle's with high costing facilities. A known example is, Mr. Mukesh Ambani in India has build a vehicle along with bed, a movie theater, TV, AC and entire sound proof vehicle which cost him a lot but expectation and wish making it price less, he also build such, aircraft for himself.
Moving to consider the other side, there are multiple drawbacks of vehicles, such as, traffic, noise, air pollution also emission of carbon dioxide causing ozone layer depletion, which is huge impact to environment cycle. The amount of money is spending on these items is too much high as compare to their as actual requirements in daily life as compare to price. A relevant example of this is above mentioned vehicle took around INR 15 crore which is very high amount.
In conclusion, we can say that, cars and airplane are necessary of modern human life but need to ensure they are not spending too much money on this. Despite of having to huge pricess the people are not stopping to buy it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76430976431 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48378598699 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3923736327 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160024713176 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600655148687 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711724886011 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107954795835 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570853612364 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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