The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.

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The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples.

Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that cars and airplanes have a lot of importance in this this contemporary world. In my opinion, this statement is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the important features of this statement before deducing a final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that cars and airplanes are the necessities of this current society. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that personal personal cars provides freedom to the people to enjoy the drive according to their taste. Moreover, car owners can avoid the congested public bus stops and railway stations. In addition, airplanes are the easy access of this modern world to travel across the world in less time with more comfortable journey. As a prime example, travelers can catch domestic and international flights very easily in certain emergency situations and it provokes the tourism all around the world via direct flights to tourists spots.
Another, pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that travelling from one place to another is not the basic issue for people who travel across the globe for a lot of purposeful reasons. For instance, easy travelling promotes trade relationship between nations and this step is essential to maintain the economy of the country.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that cars and airplanes are not only the best available facilities for people but also it is essential for current society to raise the economy of nation through various channels. Thus, ideas, that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: this
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: personal
...onspicuous one stems from the fact that personal personal cars provides freedom to the people to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2299270073 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72106420732 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6125964068 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140643322266 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517949203864 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522443847858 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784858432255 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499552228783 0.0609392437508 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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