Increase in information in media, the role of a library to updating textbooks is obsolete, agree or disagree?
Many people believe that the library will be replaced due to advanced technology while others still prefer to use tradition books. My personal opinion is digital books will gradually taking replace printed books.
Technology brings convenience to readers which allows people to access information more easily. Many people may experience that they can obtain information without time or space limitation through the internet. More specifically, researchers and students can gain academic data from overseas to support their theses within a short time as long as they submitted theirs requires which serve as an efficient way for their studies.
Besides, the library usually plays a role in providing people knowledge which is people can borrow books from it. However, the amount of books for people to borrow is restricted due to the size of the library that can store books. By contrast, digital books would not have these challenges, they can lend e-books to people to meet their needs. Furthermore, the e-book is more eco-friendly compared with that of a printed book.
In conclusion, the advantages of digital books are efficiently supported academic studies, infinitely e-books to lend and eco-friendly which are important factors that tradition library does not have and it is the reason online media will gradually replace printed books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
...still prefer to use tradition books. My personal opinion is digital books will gradually taking ...
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
...opinion is digital books will gradually taking replace printed books. Technology br...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42180094787 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67190156492 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6079346164 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0708528787649 0.242375264174 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329073882774 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292339769269 0.071462118173 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449701386482 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127851629434 0.0609392437508 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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