Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that developments in acquiring information have modified the manner in which public issues is being communicated. They think that it have several drawback and benefit on the life of humans and the community as a whole. In my point of view, I completely agree with the foregoing statement because of the spread of unreliable news and advancement in the conveyance of information, respectively. This essay will discuss my justifications for the stated reasons.
To begin with, the advent of technology these days were able to make communication schemes easier and faster. Relevant news and information can be obtained from sources such as newspapers, radio, television and Internet at an instant. However, with these convenience and availability, some facts and figures may also be misleading and can affect the perspective of people with regard to the society they are living at, as real details are usually compromised from personal interest of the mass media. To illustrate, journalism pages online are highly influenced by politics and can turn around genuine news.
On the other hand, the proliferation of information technology and how it helps mankind in their everyday living cannot be ignored. Compared to the past decades, communication is a lot easier today. People can be able to converse with their loved ones even if they are far from each other. Moreover, emails and chat rooms are technologically designed to convey messages in just a matter of second. For example, the use of Gmail, Yahoo mail, and Facebook messenger comes with array of application that individuals can share information right away.
To recapitulate, the progress in information systems had undoubtedly aided people to communicate better and faster than ever before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun drawback seems to be countable; consider using: 'several drawbacks'.
Suggestion: several drawbacks
...g communicated. They think that it have several drawback and benefit on the life of humans and t...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this convenience' or 'these conveniences'?
Suggestion: this convenience; these conveniences
...d Internet at an instant. However, with these convenience and availability, some facts and figure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, such as, to begin with, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33807829181 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02871855826 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644128113879 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0106812095 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107129669976 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336403457226 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301918523583 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683196134741 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018016049726 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 55.0591133005 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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