It is argue that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that becoming a married person in society is not a right decision for anyone before completion of curriculum or finding an employment. This essay agrees that having a permanent job with completion of graduation is a right choice before going for a marriage. This essay will discuss, firstly, why it is important to complete schooling, secondly, why one must have a job, before getting married.
Going for a marriage before completion of schooling will have detrimental effects. Firstly, the students are not matured enough to run a family and, secondly, they are not ready to take any such mammoth family responsibilities. Becoming married persons before completion of schooling will exacerbate the perils involved in marriage life. For instance, The Hindu published in March 2018 that 95% of divorce cases in India related to the young couple who got married before their schooling.
A guaranteed revenue at the end of the month is imperative to run a family smoothly. It is always hard for a job less person to be the key person of a family and hence having a job before marriage is essential. An unemployeed person will never earn respect from spouse if he/she unable to run family without any impediments. For example, a recent study conducted by The University of Melbourne stated that 80% of the depressed patients have told the reason for their depression as a jobless marriage.
In conclusion, it is always a good option to become a married person after completion of school and have an upstanding and lucrative job as being a family person always involved lot of maturity and a great deal of responsibilities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98905109489 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91120339837 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525547445255 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8418266821 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158393326693 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637230672769 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047577097866 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103093481585 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459793830693 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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