It is believed that there are as many as 1800 rare plants and animals on Earth. Should we protect the endanged species? Agree disagree?
In these days, people often take a variery of viewpoints when it comes to most daily life issues. To give an illustration, while many people believe that we should protect the endangered plants and animals across the globe even though there are as many as 1800 species of them, others hold the opinions that this is not the case. This essay offers some insights in favor of the former outlook.
There are numerous reliable grounds that support the belief that protecting the endangered animals and plants is imperative although there are as many as 1800 species of them.First and foremost, every single piece of plant and animal plays an important role in maintaining balance of the ecosystem, which directly affects humans. This is especially true because plants are the food source and habitat of many species without which many creatures would have died out, leading to many detrimental consequences in the future. Without the balance in the ecosystem, it can be argued that humans’s life would be threatened in terms of food chain and environment.
In addition, ample evidences from a number of studies also suggest that many endangered species are beneficial to human in terms of agriculture and medicine. There is no doubt that people would have preserved these precious species for their own advantages while protecting the environment. To give a illustration, in the field of medicine, the brain of the endangered white sharks has the constituent that can cure mental disorders syndrome in the elderly.
In conclusion, from the analysis above, it is obvious that the endangered plants and animals should be protected and preserved regardless of how many species there may have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72022074916 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.912516762 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.6 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362244590439 0.242375264174 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130671589174 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132303252998 0.071462118173 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228335043037 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623933222287 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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