In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why?
In the last century, there have been quite a number of inventions such as computers, airplanes and antibiotics, which improve humans’ life significantly. In my opinion, I believe that the computer is the most imperative invention for a several reasons, which would be explained in the essay below.
There are numerous reliable grounds to support the belief that the advent of computers plays an important role in the modern world. First and foremost, computers have a wide spectrum of application in every aspects of human’s life such as the television that we watch every day. This is true especially when it comes to scientific research in many fields such as medicine and engineering, which demanded a vast computational capability. Without the assistance of computers, it can be argued that human’s civilization would not have reached this far because people are unable to perform as many calculations and works as the computers do.
In addition, ample evidence from a number of studies also suggests that computers help improve productivity. There is no doubt that computers can assist people by performing certain task on their behalf much faster and far more accurately. To give an illustration, in the field of engineering, a huge amount of time-consuming computational work has to be performed by the engineers in the old days. Thanks to the help of the computers, these daunting tasks have been accomplished in a short time and therefore, speed up the overall process.
In conclusion, from the analysis above, it is obvious that computers are the greatest and most important invention of human kind.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, as to, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24427480916 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10408375147 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6657160404 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182293610784 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697774722186 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678104432873 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120928711989 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591143468831 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.