It is important to maintain a right balance of your work and other respects of one’s life such as family and leisure sport. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Balance is needed in all aspects of life. In this modern era, to maintain an adequate balance of work life is very important. These days, there is an ongoing debate that balance of work life as compared to other areas such as family and leisure sport. In this essay, I will provide my point of view by analyzing the work-life balance with other activities.
Things will not be in good shape if twenty hours of a day is consumed in work. Workaholic people are one-dimensional people who feel difficulties in their life. For instance, according to a study by the University of Texas revealed that the human brain is a special type of machines which needs complete rest before doing work again. Hence, people need to clear their mind by utilizing their mind to other healthy activities like sports.
On the other hand, the family is the key aspect for any person in this world. People who work well also need to allocate quality time with their family. For example, a survey done in the 21st century showed that employees who had spent quality time their children and wife are happier and their performance in professional life is far better than those who do not have this good habit. Therefore, people should be careful enough to divide their time between the work and the family in such a way that nothing should be affected.
In a nutshell, work, family and other activities are an important factor in one’s life. Thus, people need to balance it in some way. This essay discussed the benefits of the balanced work life and deleterious effects of it unbalanced one.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74545454545 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45656751728 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5252447536 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282202640389 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111734668534 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857824957826 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19871343505 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116075983172 0.0609392437508 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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