It is important to maintain a right balance of your work and other respects of one’s life such as family and leisure sport. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Balance is needed in all aspects of life. In this modern era, to maintain adequate balance of work life is very important. These days, there is an ongoing debate that balance of work life as compared to other areas such as family and leisure sport. In this essay, I will provide my point of view by analyzing work life balance with other activities.
Things will not be in good shape if twenty hours of a day is consumed in work. Workaholic people are one dimensional people who feel difficulties in their life. For instance, according to study by University of Texas revealed that human brain is special type of machines which needs complete rest before doing work again. Hence, people need to clear their mind by utilizing their mind to other healthy activities like sports. Moreover, sports or other physical activities are good for health.
On the other hand, family is the key aspect for any person in this world. People need to allocate quality time with their family. For example, a survey done in 21th century showed that employees who had spent quality time their children and wife are more happy and their performance in professional life is far better than those who does not have this good habit. Therefore, people should be careful enough to divide their time between the work and the family.
In a nutshell, work, family and other activities are important factor of one’s life. Thus, people need to balance it in some way. This essay discussed the benefits of the balanced work life and deleterious effects of it unbalanced one.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85338345865 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39612924428 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7861452161 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6875 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281339674728 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107556783838 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893698620583 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200593751857 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121052963135 0.0609392437508 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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