It is important to maintain a right balance of your work and other respects of one’s life such as family and leisure sport. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Balance is desired in all aspects of life. In this modern era, maintenance of an adequate balanced work life is very significant. These days, there is an ongoing debate on keeping balance between work and family time by a person. In this essay, I will provide my point of view with supporting examples by analyzing the balanced work-life with its counterpart.
Things will not be in good shape if twenty hours of a day is consumed in office. Workaholic people are one-dimensional who face difficulties throughout their life. For instance, a study done by the University of Texas revealed that the human brain is a special type of machines which needs complete rest before doing work again. Hence, people need to clear their mind by paying attention to other healthy activities too, like sports. Moreover, sports or other extra-curricular activities are good for human's physical, social and mental well-being.
On the other hand, the family is the key fragment for any person in this world. People are actually working for their family needs, thus they must allocate quality time with their family. For example, according to a survey done in the early 21st century showed that employees who had spent quality time their children and wife are happier and their performance in professional life is far better than those who do not indulge themselves to their families. Therefore, people should be careful enough to divide their time between the work and the family in such a way that nothing should be affected.
In a nutshell, work, family and other activities are important factors in one’s life. So, people need to balance it in some way. The essay discussed the benefits of the balanced work life as well as deleterious effects of not having balance in life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67074860307 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2845919843 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24134212565 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908063746158 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726213160505 0.071462118173 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166883362152 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889249481232 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.