It is important to maintain a right balance of your work and other respects of one’s life such as family and leisure sport. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about the negative and the positive effects on society due to life balance and modern-day stress. While it is possible to claim that we have to give our full focus on education or employment, my point of view is that the life balance with priority levels will protect our life’s. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view while analyzing the different sides of the argument to a greater extent.
First and foremost, there are myriad of benefits a person can gain from the life balancing such as high quality of the life, the life encapsulation, confidentiality of life, the integrity, the availability, life security, and proper family life. For example, some of the people arrange the month while giving priority for high prioritize the tasks such as education, family, sports and leisure, and enjoy true value of the life. Therefore, it is accepted that the true values of the life and the happiness are the results of the balancing of day-to-day events.
On the other hand, activity or life event management is the best process for quick success. For example, most of developed country citizens balance the basics of life such as exercises, education, junk foods and health. Therefore, those citizens have the joy of life, and they enjoy the life.
In conclusion, it is trusted that the life is not only the employer or employee in an organisation. Life has many ways and methods. In nutshell, we all can enjoy the life after we manage it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84291187739 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68371045132 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3401781698 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187923243442 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698796879531 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345554501356 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112796558145 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340531980667 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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