Some people think that parent should teach children ho to be a good member of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people that the positive and negative effects on society due to the school’s education systems and family education. While it is possible to clam that the parent’s education is the best way, in my point of view that the school education outweighs parents’ guide lines. In this essay I shall explain my point of view while analysing school education and parent education.
First and foremost, there is a group of people who believe that school education system makes good quality pupils. Because of the systematic and scientific educations of schools, teachers have more control on the pupils. For example, Sri Lankan government has established a school base education system, even though the students’ parents are not well educated. Because of the above points, it is considered that the school education as the best to make good civilisation.
On the other hand, those who argue for parent base education has a different view point and say that the best way to produce a good citizen is the parent base education. But, if parents are not well educated this argument will be braked. For example, most of the African countries have a good heritage that inherited from their ancestors, and children’s do not attend schools, but still unable develop a better civilization. Therefore, it is taken in to consideration that the parent base education can’t develop better children.
In conclusion, it is believed that to scandalize a civilisation school education as a must. In nutshell, I would like to suggest that the professional’s and government and professionals’ interference is essential in a methodical manner to reduce the risk of school education in a cognitive manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a methodical manner" with adverb for "methodical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sionals' interference is essential in a methodical manner to reduce the risk of school education ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a cognitive manner" with adverb for "cognitive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... to reduce the risk of school education in a cognitive manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 5.75862068966 399% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3038869258 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2185866896 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52296819788 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8159678227 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159963831495 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737662210781 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368311120779 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103965096742 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313660960611 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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