It is said that for some developed countries, tourism may cause some disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
The importance of tourism for advanced countries, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. Tourism not only brings more cash to any country but also brings terrorism and diseases. It can be agreed tourism may cause few disadvantages to country’s economy and environment, but it has some advantages as well. This essay will discuss both positive and negative impacts and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are various ways to explain why tourism can be disadvantageous, but the most conspicuous one is rooted in the fact that it will bring terrorist acts in the country. Moreover, tourists try to change the social and economic integrity of a developed country. For an illustration, research in this area reveals, tourism is harmful to the community and environment health. Thus, it is apparent tourism brings more disadvantages than advantages to first world countries.
Nevertheless, opponents of this trend tend to believe in some cases, tourism is boon to developed countries as it helps to generate income to many households and uplift the economy as well. In addition, it not only contributes to increase the prestige of a country but also helps to advertise the country’s natural beauty to the world. For example, the recent study from Harvard University shows eighty-five percents of tourists visit Australia because the advertisement is done by fellow travelers. Therefore, it is obviously true tourism is beneficial to any developed countries.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude tourism is detrimental as it is responsible for many terrorist acts and environmental concerns, although it has many advantages that cannot be ignored.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38376383764 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15767132488 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1357976239 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215967029792 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075998745324 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599014663691 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123081681431 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514521309224 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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