The kind of a person’s life depends on his/her personality. What’s your opinion of this, and use your own experience as examples.
Personality plays an essential role in the wellbeing of an individual and society. The issue of whether the kind of a person's life depends on his/her personality has sparked a heated debate. While some argue that a person's life does not depend on his/her personality, I think that personality influences a person's life. In this essay, I will put forward my point of view by analysing both sides of arguments.
To begin with, personality traits such as being an extrovert and an introvert affect a person's life. To cite an example, according to a recent survey done by the Stanford University, 85% of the people benefitted from their behavioral aspects, whereas 10% of people faced disadvantages due to it. They improved their existing scenarios extraordinarily, and that paved their way for a better economic future.
Those who assert that personality does not impact a person's life come from the traditional way of thinking. To illustrate, they showcased a recent article in 'The Time of India' newspaper, which states that 10% of people are successful due to their personal traits. This illustration does not provide full support to their argument.
To conclude, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case. I suggest that the kind of person's life depends on his/her personality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: kind of
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, whereas, while, i think, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09345794393 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92244051655 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57476635514 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0077152227 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322842347852 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139081295639 0.0925447433944 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14770200139 0.071462118173 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216043417585 0.151781067708 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114008380628 0.0609392437508 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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