Large shopping malls

Essay topics:

Large shopping malls

The importance of large shopping malls which was debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that the beneficial reject this notion. The substantial influence of ha sparked over the controversy the potential impact in this recent years. In my opinion, the formers proposition appears to be more rational. this essay will elaborate in my favouring view point this trend and thus will lead to logical conclusion.

there are myriad of reasons which will explain this arguments but the most preponderant one is large shopping malls provide extra facility like banking, parking etc. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is large shopping malls provide extra facilities like, banking, parking etc. Needless to say, all these merits stand large shopping malls in a good stead.

elaborating my view point, there are some merits that negate but the crucial effects is that large shopping malls provide extra discount and offers. Besides, large shopping malls destroy the small sale industry. Hence, it is apparent why are many in favour of large shopping malls.

According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of large shopping malls too great to ignore.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, so, thus, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 194.0 242.827586207 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36082474227 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56870726008 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592783505155 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.382722264 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5454545455 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.544940277229 0.242375264174 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247838633631 0.0925447433944 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16166757753 0.071462118173 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37202400268 0.151781067708 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15194992222 0.0609392437508 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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