Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What’s your opinion? Good or bad?
Large shopping centres are replacing the small stores. Some people argue that large shopping malls have threatened the jobs of shopkeepers while others opine that shopkeepers can choose alternative jobs. However, I believe, large department stores are good from customers perspective.
Firstly, Customers could save time as different goods required in daily lifes are found in same mall. Before people had to spend hours to rush different shops to garner the basic goods required in day-to-day life whereas nowadays, people are able to shop within an hour just after their works. A report of online survey revealed that 87 percentage job holders are shopping after their office without impacting their job which was quiet impossible in past days.
Secondly, customers are able to choose the goods which meet their requirments. With the easy installation of cameras in different corners of shopping chambers, owner does not have to worry regarding the stealing of goods and customers are able to visit different zone of shopping mall on their own. This provides them an opportunity to opt the needs that fulfill their demands. One of the researches published in Scicom journal concluded that customers prefer big shopping mart because they can select all the goods on their own.
In a nutshell, big department stores provides numerous benefits to customers despite small retailers lose their jobs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34234234234 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55981126546 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6289369452 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204057031345 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928777555798 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799200977907 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128960442382 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795004725859 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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