Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.

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Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.

Around the world, urbanization has caused the development of malls in different cities. These malls are replacing the small retail shops. While this trend is supported by some, others are not in agreement with it. This essay will cover advantages and disadvantages of a mall culture.

Proponents of the idea believe that the malls will be the future of doing business in the wholesale and retail sector. As these places provide a plethora of options to buy and sell different goods to customers. For instance, electronic items, merchandise, restaurants, and movies are some of the channels to run a business. As a result of it, people are attracted to shop in malls. Another benefit, it saves time for customers since it is a one stop solution for them. Therefore, shopping complexes are popular in today's time.

On the other hand, the closing of small shops will lead to unemployment and increase in prices of the goods. As every small shop, today employs a set of people and they will lose their jobs if a shop is closed. Moreover, retail shops sell things on discount in contrast to malls. So, customers have to extra for buying articles from malls. In this way, it will increase inflation in the country. Therefore, retail shops should stay in the market.

To sum up, malls and small shops can run their business in parallel. In my opinion, an ecosystem can be created where small shops are allowed to run their businesses in conjunction with malls. And, people will be able to take advantages of shopping from malls and small shops.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...erchandise, restaurants, and movies are some of the channels to run a business. As a result...
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Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of shopping from malls and small shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84528301887 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60448445314 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1416210763 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.5789473684 104.977214359 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9473684211 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244549051244 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789166139173 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689717805083 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160536192253 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762273843216 0.0609392437508 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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