Large shopping malls are replacing small shops.What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the replacement of small shops by large shopping malls. Some people believe that larger shopping malls are more beneficial, while others maintain that smaller shops can best benefit the buyer. This essay will discuss the expansion of large shopping malls and advantages associated with it.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments in favour of larger shopping malls. Firstly, the most conspicuous is that shopping malls house numerous shops and brands under one roof. Therefore, it becomes easier for the buyer to select from variety of options and that too within the same mall. As an example, buyers can easily access and compare prices of products of various brands easily. As a result, an individual will have easy and hassle free access to all shops located in a mall.
On the other hand, proponents in favour of small shops are not cognizant with the odds associated with small and distantly located shops. Henceforth, not only movement from one shop to another is a major problem but also severe traffic jams are faced in rushy days. For instance, shops are so much crowded on black firdays, Easters and Eid shopping that it is almost next to impossible to commute from one shop to another. Resultantly, large shopping malls having numerous shops serve there purpose best in rushy days and lessen the shopping time.
To recapitulate, aforementioned discussion propounds that the ease of access and convenience provided by large shopping malls is extensively replacing smaller shops.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, so, therefore, while, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14785992218 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54588915221 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579766536965 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5219380104 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.769230769 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331636818106 0.242375264174 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13120769012 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940894125507 0.071462118173 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230129276465 0.151781067708 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784108888355 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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