Mass media plays a significant role in our life. Some people argue that the violence displayed on TV augments crime in our society and people become more violent after watching violent movies, while others deny that. This essay will discuss the reasons why violence in TV could lead to an increase in crime rate.
To begin with, people tend to believe whatever is shown on TV and movies are real and they try to portray them in real life. People must be aware that the stories and action sequences in movies are not always real. According to a recent study conducted by an eminent university, the number of people who have committed crime based on what they encounter in movies has significantly increased over the years and this leads to increase in the crime rate of the society. Also, the mental state of the people watching violent movies is disturbed and they tend to involve in anti-social activities.
On the other hand, people think that violence in TV and movies does not have an impact on the crime rate. These people are not aware of the consequences of action sequences performed in movies. Moreover, these days, teenagers started to that behave more like the movie stars and they run into serious troubles. This clearly indicates that violence on TV has made a significant deterioration in the quality of life of people.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the various standpoints of how violence portrayed on TV and movies have an impact on society. I completely agree that violence on TV and other mass media can cause people to become criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.843866171 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51919017738 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509293680297 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.75632413 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.230769231 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278710054851 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106564649642 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511480669704 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183197953677 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308186274809 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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