The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they shouldn’t waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this day and age, the purpose of public libraries has become ongoing debate among people all around the world. although many believe that libraries have to focus an provide people all their resources on written books, wheras others have argued that libraries parallel of books should provide hi-tech media and computer software. In this essay I will discuss on both sides.
To begin with, there are several reasons why I support that liabraries have to offer their readers both written books and hi-tech media such as DVDs. First and foremost is that computer software are more easy acess and anybody could gain them. In addition, individuals are able to send sources to every where in charge of free by an E-mail. for exampel, a group of educational researchers at Harward University undertook a study among fifty students globaly. The statistic was significanty positive and result reveled that who just used computer saftware are three times more likely be successful in their lessons. Thus, the more hi-tech media people use in libraries, the more near to obtain their goals.
On the other hand, sitting in front of screen all the time and using computer saftware have negative impact on people's health. That is to say, there is no doubt that looking and working long time with computer a have a bad effect on eyes and led to obesity. Hence, using written books at the libraries is the best way of reading books and educational sources.
In conclusion, Although there are several positive factors on reading written books in the public libraries I believe that hi-tecth is much more better and should be provided by libraries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97454545455 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39673055544 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5259240077 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246475596417 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081275318212 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724719715145 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150929135944 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668748484589 0.0609392437508 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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