Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about the impact of native region on accomplished person? Give personal examples
In these days, people often take a variety of viewpoints when it comes to most daily issues. To give a illustration, while many people believe that regions affect the success of a person, I reckon that region is only one out of many factors that define the success of an individual.
There are numerous reliable grounds that support the belief that region is not the only factor that drives a person’s success. First and foremost, there are many other contributing factors such as attitude, education and family background, each of which plays an imperative role in promoting an individual’s success. This is true esspecially when it comes the fact that a child is more likely to become a successful leader in the future provided that he was nurtured in a favorable environment which promotes leadership and fostered communication skills. Without other crucial factors, it can be argued that an individual is still far from achieving his pinnacle.
In addition, ample evidence from a number of studies also suggests that the key to success of a majority of successful people is their attitude and passion. There is no doubt that with a right attitude and an extinguishable passion, people would work at their utmost to achieve their goal and therefore, succeed in their field. To give an illustration, Steve Jobs, who invented the iPhone, dedicated his life to create his technology masterpiece that eventually brought him and his company both fame and success.
In conclusion, from the above analysis, it is obvious that the success of a person is the combination of many factors and region is not the only component.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... it comes to most daily issues. To give a illustration, while many people believe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, while, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 5.94088669951 303% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91729622835 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9712094037 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243988670952 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105352188862 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121010823158 0.071462118173 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18271942508 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10128235145 0.0609392437508 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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