Mass communication influence our lives especially the children.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement.
Mass communication is a way to deliver any information to mass at the same time through several mediums. This mass mediums have a massive impact on our lives especially on young individuals.This essay will discuss how mass communication has impacted the lives of children chiefly in both positive and negative way.
To commence with, the explosion of media with technology nowadays has influenced the children immensely in their education. Through the availability of sufficiently advanced media communication such as google, pupils find it easy to learn any disciplines of their course. Mathematics or Physics, for example, are considered to be the toughest subject among students but through interesting digital way of teaching that mass media provides to children, they find it as more interesting. In short, in terms of education, mass media has really impacted in a positive way on children.
Having said that, it comes with certain cons as well for young people. Mass communication has a broader platform with variety of both useful as well as anti social elements. A child, for instance, may come across to certain violent computer games on the internet which may divert his mind in a wrong direction. Hence, in such case, mass communication can be proved as a loathsome medium for the children.
This essay discussed how mass communication impact children to make them learn in an interesting way while it does influence them in a negative way as well. To my way of opinion, mass communication has more positive impact than negative however, it demands certain limitations for children while using it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, may, really, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in short, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2030651341 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00864615304 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9407699305 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290866206191 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110519475677 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716493452902 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182126744275 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606785966641 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.