Mass media like TV, newspaper, and radio influence people, particularly young generation. Do you think it works as a pivot to shape the society? What is your opinion?
In past time when people got latest news by kingdom's messenger but time has changed a lot in advancement era of competitive technology era. Some people believe that mass media TV, radio, newspaper are necessity part of their life while other argue that it increases violence due to racism in society. In this essay, I shall discuss both views by analyzing the argument and provide the logical conclusion.
Firstly, there multifarious reason why mass media has engulfed the people preferences in such a way to considered as essential part of life. It is claimed that mass medias provide blistering news updated due to espouse of internet technology. For example, TV, radio, newspaper, Facebook, whats app and many more. These apps on mobile provide notification for the latest event in their vicinity. People take advantages to report any abnormal cases to police quickly.
On contrary, some people are apprehended by ebriety in terms of non-social works which cause violence in societies. It is argued that these people spread wrong and violence information on Facebook and whats app which cause severe loss in terms of human's life. Some channels participate in swindle with assaulter to lit more crime in societies. Today's media wants every single information for celebrity also and cause much disturbance by surveillance.
In recapitulate, while there are strong arguments for this notion. I believe if we use these mass media in betterment way, we could improve our society to better extent. I would recommend, regime of nation must scrutiny these channels of news and in defaulter case, it may be penalized with stringent blistering actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1992481203 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75891956672 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.46280063 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117901665351 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385395911156 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481724832764 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696386851008 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313858140581 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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