Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)
Since pastime, whether sports legend or artisan as an actor in in movies has always influenced a individual life. Spectators watching game accept some enthusiastic in their life and perform better to achieve defined goal. I reckon to believe that skills and talent have always impact individual life in positive way and will explore the several reasons associated with this fact.
To start with, glamour world which is called film industry of different nation has profound and multifarious impacts. One of them positive vibes which seduce the audience in theatre and overwhelm their aim. Some arduous people inspire themselves in that way to imitate and find in standing themselves in to same profile. For example, several actors such James Bond, Dilip Kumar etc. In addition, people exaggerate their talents and wish their child in same profession.
Moreover, there are other benefits which attract the people to indulge in these profession. One of them is financial growth which is imperative level in society in individual life. In addition, playing a game always provide unambiguous health benefits and maintain the health fitness. For instance, playing game such as Cricket, Football, Olympic games etc. These games's spectators always found themselves in a doer situation. People insists their family member and wish to follow the same profession.
In conclusion, as aforementioned the blatant and conspicuous impact on people life discussed. I believe life of followers lighten by these legend spirits.. I would suggest, playing in a game not only provides energy, money and enthusiasm but it keeps away from diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.359375 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67738603793 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9707145432 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7058823529 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0273692728335 0.242375264174 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00895901552986 0.0925447433944 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0161857967206 0.071462118173 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0158446712347 0.151781067708 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111691758778 0.0609392437508 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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