One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In pastime where people were in abundance of medical facilities caused high mortality rates due to fatal diseases. Some people believe that medical care has increased the life longer and increased the life expectancy and other people believe that medical care unit has increased the population which enormously gives birth of other major problems. In this essay, I shall discuss both positives and negatives by analyzing this argument and provide the logical conclusion.
To start with, there are myriad and multifarious advantages of medical care unit. One of them is increase in life expectancy and increase in level of cure of dangerous diseases. It has been said that medicines provide a better cure level without getting pain in today's life. For example, earlier bacteria like malaria, typhoid and other were catastrophe diseases and only due to medical development these have been taken care.
On contrary, people see this development as many disadvantages and said they are correct on their notion. One disadvantage is increase in population whereas there are no increase in resources. In addition, in terms of livelihood for human, it creates unemployment which increase the unemployment rate rapidly. Over crowded place with population provide pollution for water and air further give birth to many other bacteria which are cure-less.
In recapitulate, there are strong evidences for both views of this argument. In my personal view the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. With increase in technology in medicine, mortality rate has decreased over the last few decades.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, for example, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41700404858 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82477965361 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566801619433 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 3.65517241379 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3240066239 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240126454025 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786904081126 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609534615824 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139630815755 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606366718341 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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