Should public schools server healthy, locally-grown foods to children?
Nowadays public and government schools are lagging behind from private schools in terms of education, pupils strength and performance in examinations. Government is working in multiple directions to make public schools more adequate for pupils. As one step as subsidy or serving foods in schools to attract pupils. To put pupils on high performance, rebate in terms of serving nutrition food and give them hands-on for food health classes in their study course. This essay will discuss about how foods in public school play a pivotal role in betterment of education.
Firstly, there are myriad adequate actions which government takes to private opportunities to students. One of them is introducing a subject of home science to nurture knowledge for how cook food and nutrition varies from one type of food to other type. As middle-class children will get diet per day and education in theoretically and practically. Students get knowledge how a plants grow and harvest with nutrition.
Secondly, parents working in peasants jobs do not worry about their child for mid-day meal. Many governments are taking initiatives to nail down the problems of low attendance from students and performance. People believe that introducing home cooking classes in their curriculum, they will be independent to save their self from malnutrition. This step from government guarantee for increase in population of pupils.
In conclusion, this essay has discussed for facts which indulge in participation of pupils for betterment of their lives. I will recommend that regime should scrutiny for distribution of food package to schools and make sure no authority person embalm and collude in corruption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 5.75862068966 382% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37735849057 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93454401804 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5879855497 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.0 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168912934895 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059043176278 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610119724247 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973309148235 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827446327809 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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