Some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additional funding, but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors.
In past, people imagined and did coincidence of star tilt and trailing light with their myth and spread some wrong instruction in this world. After science's discoveries with outer space made progress in human welfare which resulted in universe discoveries. Some people believe that money spending on exploring space is useful and other people argue that money should be spent on immediate problems. I reckon the notion to believe in exploration of this universe, will discuss both views of space exploration and will give the logical conclusion.
Firstly, exploring the outer world provides profound and bizarre information related to galaxies and earth location during time. Every nations are bound to explore this universe to get success or want to be dominance for rest of world. They allocate budgets to every section of expenditure like defense, in-house problems, educations and many more. We had astronaut Neil Armstrong who visited space and provide information of this universe. Due to ISRO , NASA space agencies, we have much information for this space. This is only due to space exploration only, without this it couldn't be exists.
Secondly, people believe to spent money on exists problems are somehow question mark. People must think that there are equal budget allocated to these different categories. Every nations are not taking participate in universe exploration, Scientist searching outside is also human welfare task which provide many advantages today. For example TV, cell phone which receive signal from satellite. Today's scientist are searching life expectancy on other planet and sending satellite their. For example Mars planet. People must believe scientist and emphasize them.
In recapitulate, people believe as aforementioned in space exploration think human welfare as may pivotal advantages. I would recommend, people should emphasized scientist for their exploration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...alaxies and earth location during time. Every nations are bound to explore this unive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 290.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56551724138 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72481072266 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610344827586 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2037240201 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9473684211 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11761311117 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043407190955 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390884167824 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085489237895 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040766764702 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 53.1260098522 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.