Extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc are dangerous and should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
In recently, the phenomenon extreme sports and its impact has sparked a heated debate. Although, contested by many people that extreme sports are highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of people. I am inclined to believe that extreme sports can be positive and should not be banned for societies in this world and I shall analyze that thoroughly in this essay.
From compatible standpoint, extreme sports are advantageous for people and possess many reason why it should be part of our life. One of them is courage and team spirit which lie down success ladder to contestant. For example contestants participate in these extreme sports such river rafting, skiing etc need team spirit and courage, face real challenges and lie down the epitome example of team spirit. People believe not only these games provide knowledge but provide potential enthusiastic for future challenges.
From contrary standpoint, people playing these games are unaware of their imminent corpse. They argue that these games should be exists and are catastrophic in our lives with fear of death in mind always. People participating in these games lie down their life in danger. In addition, to play these games a lot of money is required. People argue these games should be banned and should not be emphasized.
Overall, aforementioned, there are strong arguments discuss for both views. In my opinion, these games are playable and should not be banned. I would recommend these extreme games must be played in surveillance of safety and measures of standard norms.
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but, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19615384615 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71973665189 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7005323471 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187893257977 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709960206727 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617421861689 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122600250948 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292538755927 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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