A county becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that a nation where there are people from various countries and cultures benefits from these characteristics as it becomes more fascinating and grows at a faster pace. I totally agree with this opinion and I will elaborate on the reasons below.
The main reason why I believe that the mixture of individuals from other nationalities represents an advantage for a country is because a culturally and ethnically diverse country is more interesting as there are many different lifestyles reflecting different ethnic origins in it. More specifically, in a multi-cultural society, one can enjoy a variety of unique traditions and customs which is very exciting and adds spice to life. For instance, I live in a highly diverse area and the options when eating out are outstanding as there are so many styles of cuisine to choose from.
Moreover, I believe that progress in multicultural nations is much quicker due to the diversity of the workforce. The reason for this is that different nationalities have different strengths which can be harnessed in the workplace. For instance, Europeans have high levels of creativity and artistic flair, while Asians have outstanding skills in math and science.
In conclusion, companies can draw on these respective strengths of the population, and as a consequence, the economy of the country will prosper.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22374429224 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09407821316 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4401358839 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.111111111 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942597791988 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331647029456 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359741451529 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486578881178 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496134609744 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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