"Mistakes, obviously, show us what needs improvement. Without mistakes, how would we know what we had to work on?"
Are mistakes the portals of discovery or progress?
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Human being is more prone to occur errors and mistakes in his life. These mistakes helps him to improve the weak areas and deficiencies. Thus, mistakes are the forum for improvement and moving on to achieve success in life. I agree with this statement. There will be an explanation on this statement with sufficient reasons and a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, everyone makes mistakes in his or her life and suffers to some extent. These mistakes become a lesson for them to further improve themselves and not to do the same in future life. People can point out their weak areas when they do errors and can rectify for further progress.
Furthermore, mistakes lead to many discoveries as people learn so many new things while improving themselves. so it help them to achieve success in many fields. For example, a person can make perfect thing if he tries many times by making wrong ones.
In addition, people can learn more from their mistakes and can progress in their life.
In conclusion, mistakes can be considered as the key to success and progress as they teach good lessons to improve ourselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... new things while improving themselves. so it help them to achieve success in many...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...hings while improving themselves. so it help them to achieve success in many fields....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 191.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87958115183 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57356339147 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 379.143842365 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9147659457 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6923076923 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0730656641881 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306487427461 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0175100184494 0.071462118173 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463043637379 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152282531577 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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