Some people think law changes human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
Laws are made and implemented for smooth functioning of the society. The tendency of human beings to occur errors can be controlled by proper application of these laws. I agree with the statement that laws impacts the human behavior. In the following crub of writing, I will share my opinion with reasons, before deducing a plausible conclusion.
First and foremost, there are various punishments for wrong behavior of people like fines and imprisonment. Fines are imposed to prevent the people from doing acts which are harmful for the society. For example, if a person breaks traffic rules, he is liable to pay the fine or challans.
Secondly, some people do offences and crimes which result in life sentence, and sometimes death sentence. Such type of punishments are required to abstain the people from acting against the laws. For instance, an individual can stop stealing, if he is sentenced imprisonment.
In addition to this, fines for breaking traffic rules are also important to control the road accidents and other mishappenings. Otherwise people do not bother to follow the rules while driving which may cause serious accidents and traffic congestions.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out the conclusion that laws and rules are very important to change the human behavior. Government should implement the laws properly, keeping in mind the tendency of human beings and required punishments for the same.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... following crub of writing, I will share my opinion with reasons, before deducing...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...road accidents and other mishappenings. Otherwise people do not bother to follow the rule...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29437229437 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83476742848 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593073593074 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9819139183 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3571428571 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199894468238 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682273094782 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600186745584 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10371672778 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358934094095 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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