“More information available online so library books are useless.” Agree or disagree with statement
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the fact that due to technological advancements, printed books have largely been replaced by E-books. Critics, however, claim that library books are still useful source of information for knowledge acquisition. I, personally believe that later statement is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight importance of library books with the addition of material available online.
At the outset, there are myriad of argument discussing the fact that library books has their own importance, despite introduction of books available online. Firstly , the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that online material is an easy access to everyone to read required material at any time. In this senerio, people usually save the time to reach to the library and collect material from printed books. However, despite all these things material available in hard copy is more beneficial and easy to memorize.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that we are in a society where technology is the blessing of this contemporary world. But there is always a flip side of a coin, As a prime example, it is proven medically that personalize books in printed forms are better option to grasp maximum of knowledge with more effective way then their alternates.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that being a part of technological world, we should keep in mind our traditional way of learning that has diminished. Thus ideas that will bring benefit would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, so, still, then, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23754789272 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84721824072 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4747691835 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150974191231 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055133437373 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547702785123 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794171982084 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065746141032 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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