Most alcoholics purchase liquor legally. According to your point of view, should stores in general be legally allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics?
In the modern era, Alcoholic purchase is legal process and it was run under government undertaken. It is one of the beverages used to consume lot of people like male from the age of 18. When they consume this, they are not in their control it will cause many of the problems. My inclination falls under this view.
Firstly, Alcohol is good to health when it consume in a limit. Secondly, it was legal one. Most of the countries government are allowed to sell the liquor in shops. Thirdly, alcoholic beverages is used for the beauty cosmetics as well. For instance, In India government banned the liquor items to sell in shops and they started illegal business due to the close of the alcohol shops the government faces loss in financial problems. To overcome the problems again government gives right to run the shops.
On the flip sides, Due to consume of beverages people commit lot of issues like they are not in control, behaviour of drunken was childish.In many places they advertise to not to drink to spoil their health and their family. While drink don't drive any vehicle due to this lot of accidents are happened.
In Conclusion, Many rules came for the liquor shops to not to sell. But people are enjoying while drinking, Not only in small shops, Liquor are selling in many big hotels. This is how the most alcoholic purchase are happened legally
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71548117155 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41787430182 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502092050209 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2724314054 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1333333333 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222927308645 0.242375264174 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870866994443 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852779036943 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143628520314 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105831896453 0.0609392437508 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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