The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
In the olden days, animals have rights to roam around the forest and free to survive and search the foods and they live happily. But now a days they named as Zoo to protect the animals they live in the small surroundings. It's not at all good to hold the animals in one place. My inclination falls under this view.
Firstly, Animals have full rights to roam in the forest area. Secondly, they are not dangerous one, once it was hurt by humans then only they shows their real face they got angry and they become rude to humans. Thirdly, if we shows love and affection to the animals they will be the best friends for the human beings. For Instance, In US national park Zoo was very Eco-friendly and they started feeding the animals in by hand they are not strangers to humans and animals.
On the flip side, animals are not in natural tendency, once they in hungry they become rude and what ever they sees in the live they started to hunting. Lion is the raja for the jungle other animals are very fear of Lion because they started hunting the animals when he was hungry. In Jungles they many reptiles , Omnivores, Carnivores,Variety of bird are living. giraffe is the tallest animal in the Jungle and Rat is the smallest one and Kind of variety of Birds are living.
In the nutshell, Animals have full rights to subjected in the jungle to roam. Zoo Peoples are hurting the animals we should be banned the zoo's. I some places they are taking care of animals as friendly and some are not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ch the foods and they live happily. But now a days they named as Zoo to protect the animal...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...he foods and they live happily. But now a days they named as Zoo to protect the animal...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ls they live in the small surroundings. Its not at all good to hold the animals in ...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
...ce it was hurt by humans then only they shows their real face they got angry and they...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'show'
Suggestion: show
...y become rude to humans. Thirdly, if we shows love and affection to the animals they ...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'see'
Suggestion: see
...gry they become rude and what ever they sees in the live they started to hunting. Li...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...as hungry. In Jungles they many reptiles , Omnivores, Carnivores,Variety of bird a...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Variety
...ey many reptiles , Omnivores, Carnivores,Variety of bird are living. giraffe is the tall...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Giraffe
... Carnivores,Variety of bird are living. giraffe is the tallest animal in the Jungle and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47252747253 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26235279815 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.514593734 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224273803839 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106392659841 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960144314035 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187624580242 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108522415615 0.0609392437508 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 12.6369458128 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.5310837438 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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